Great start! I would like to see where this goes. It would be interesting to see how the MC responds to a little male attention at the cosplay convention. I like the premise of the game. I would want to see it developed further.
first of all, the thumbnail is kinda misleading. probably my fault too cuz i assume too early.
next is honestly it is still too short to give any proper comments yet but based on the few pages i read, premise of the story looks interesting.
next is probably just a me problem but the text color change kinda feel uneasy on my eyes.
and lastly, i request a few more pages! i like the way you tell stlory. very direct and not confusing. will give this a shot if you continue, just saying 😁
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Great start! I would like to see where this goes. It would be interesting to see how the MC responds to a little male attention at the cosplay convention. I like the premise of the game. I would want to see it developed further.
You asked for a custom name at the beginning, but the name Sam appears throughout your text.
Interesting start, I'd like to see where this goes...
here is my honest opinion.
first of all, the thumbnail is kinda misleading. probably my fault too cuz i assume too early.
next is honestly it is still too short to give any proper comments yet but based on the few pages i read, premise of the story looks interesting.
next is probably just a me problem but the text color change kinda feel uneasy on my eyes.
and lastly, i request a few more pages! i like the way you tell stlory. very direct and not confusing. will give this a shot if you continue, just saying 😁
yeah, that's all for now
Please give your comments here so I can add stuff in the game based on the playerbase, version 0.2 will come out soon finishing Lia's first event!